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The fire is the cycle of love!
She lights a match,
a very small flame,
you've met her,
she lights a candle,
you know what she likes,
she lights a campfire,
she said "she likes you",
she lights the forest afire,
you are in love!

she calls in the fire fighter,
you see her with another guy,
she calls in the air forces,
she has droped the bomb,
you know she is gone!

she calls to the fire fighter,
the Fire is out,
you are as cold as dead ashes,
sad as the wild animals who lost their homes,
the volenteers clean the ashes away,
you go hangout your friends,
who lights the match now?
who lights the match now?
no one knows...!
©2005-2009 ~Kalisaya
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This is a poem I made it American Lit.!!!!!!!
We were talking about Walt Whitman (He's reallycool!)
It is in a guys perspective and no I'm not a guy!!!

I hope you like it!!!!!

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:iconmaximsofcalumniation:
guy, girl, who cares?
you write good poems, so light hearted, so emotional
yet I can identify with it, cause we've all been infatuated before :P
yup, i'm a guy
thank you for the wonderfully moving piece
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Cheers!!

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Calling them lyrics or poetry isn't a thing I would agree with.
:iconkalisaya:
thank you!!!!!!!!!!:clap:
I don't that many coments about my work!!!!!!:blowkiss:
must pet you :petting::petting::petting::petting::petting::petting::petting:
:iconkalisaya:
thank you!!!!!!!!!!:clap:
I don't get that many coments about my work!!!!!!:blowkiss:
must pet you :petting::petting::petting::petting::petting::petting::petting:
:iconmidnightryoko:
how very sad... nice though. yay mom! ^^

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:iconmako588:
:glomp: This is really good! :D I :heart: it. Really wonderful idea, and excellent imagery.

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waiting for something to happen.
:iconopfanart:
*w* It's great!!! Hmm, I should say very inspirational!! :w00t:

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:iconkalisaya:
thanx but it is the truth for some guys though

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